Music L♥vers pls help.?

What do you think of my lyrics?



Song Title: It's you again



Last week, I saw you with her

You looked so happy,

I felt so more than sure

that it was over

with me and you



(Hook)

it happened so fast, what could I've done,

the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,

I don't want you anymore.



(Chorus)

Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there

Your at the door again.

Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,

Candy and flowers in your hand.

It's you again.



I was at the store on Friday afternoon,

I saw you there, thought it was to soon,

Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,

we got together too late



(Chorus)



(Bridge)

It’s not about how long it takes

It’s not about why we broke up

We just need to remember

The good times we had and we’ll

Be together.

If the shoe fits

We’ll never miss.



Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there

Your at the door again.

Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,

Candy and flowers in your hand.

It's you a…

Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there

Your at the door again.

Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,

Candy and flowers in your hand.

It's you again

Again

Again

Again

It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…



Maybe Lovin' you still....

Music L?vers pls help.?
oh my you have some great future ahead of you. That was fantastic!!! It was very moving and i understood it perfectly you are so going to be a great songwriter.



keep it up
Reply:not exactly my style, but it's pretty good, it flows well.
Reply:looks good
Reply:they're pretty good, a little confusing maybe
Reply:I really like it....let me know when you're finished, i know some ppl whou could prolly lay some music out for it!!