What do you think of my poems so far?

Birds



There are birds that soar and some that swim,

Some that is fat and some that are thin,

All birds sing, if you like their song,

Birds, birds, birds



There are birds that hunt, and some that are food,

And they lay those eggs that taste really good.

Some that talks, all day long,

Birds, birds, birds



There are some with colors and some that are plain,

Some that kill and some that are tame;

Each one has their very own song,

Birds, birds, birds



Outer Space

I went to sleep at 9 o'clock,

And woke up in a strange place.

I was not in my room, nor my house,

I am in outer space.



It is not just a space,

Since it is full of plants,

And weeds that sings,

And with stars wearing pants.



I wander through the space,

With curiosity in my mind,

And to find the way back home,

From this strange bind.



As I try to locate Earth,

I met little talking flowers,

And weird fairies,

Who lead me to floating towers.



I went inside one tower,

And saw a beautiful stream

That leads me back to Earth,

But then I fall down back to my room and realized it’s a dream.

Spring



Pretty blossoms grow,

The air is peaceful and warm,

Spring is here at last.

Winter



The cold wind is singing

as the snow is dancing.

The trees dressed in white,

while the moon is smiling bright.

What do you think of my poems so far?
good job...seasonal poems are always inspirational...space can relate alot to lives and how we intrpret them good job and good luck...you could also relate outer space to alziemers diease think about they dont know where they are but it is sometimes a peace ful place..