What do you think of this poem that I just wrote?

A Year





Autumn breezes with fallen leaves on the ground,

She whispers she loves me, my heart unwound,

I hold her close, can't live without her touch,

She goes to college, leaving me with not much.



Winter arrives, snow breezes and chills my breath,

Without her, the days and nights seem so long,

I hear her voice, wanting to see her today,

I close my eyes and remember yesterday.



Spring comes, the scent of flowers reminds me of her,

They say I shouldn't trust, thoughts of us a blur,

If she's with me in the end, I'll take the chance,

We can stand up to the test, not laying our love to rest.



Summer takes so long to come, waiting for her plane,

Life's empty without her, something I can not explain,

I see her, my heart and soul begins to stir,

The best day of my life, is any day I spend with her.

What do you think of this poem that I just wrote?
very creative. good job. :)
Reply:good job and very nice feelings for her................?
Reply:Its really good! Great Job!
Reply:Your love for her is an admirable trait;

I'm sure it warms her to know you're there.

But, staying solo for the time that she's away,

won't keep you two a pair.

Now jealousy's a wasted emotion, you can't control a friend; but, accept before placing your love life on hold:

You're aren't the living end!
Reply:Awwwwwww.
Reply:That was good. 0.0



-Lilly
Reply:Wow...that's really well done. You should send this off to her. I'd be floored if I got a poem like this just for me. It's awesome.