Is this poem good for a 15 year old girl i like?

feel free to make corrections,and please tell me if anything in here is "cheessy".thanks



oh how i wish someday you could be mine

its hard to get someone who is so devine

i think about you day and night

you are so beautiful in my sight





the flowers fade and the grass withers

my love for you couldnt be cut with scissors

you are a rose to my eyes and an angel to my ears

please come with me so i will have no more tears





nothing could be compared to you

my love for you sticks like glue

from day to day it is you i think about

you are my true love without a doubt





oh my dear,please be mine tonight

my love for you,i cannot fight

my love for you is burried into my heart

i loved you from the very start





will i ever have,i don't know

come with me and youll make me pure as snow

although later in life you might be the past

but my love for you will forever last

Is this poem good for a 15 year old girl i like?
that is so good!!!!



she'll love it!!!



you are a great writer!
Reply:It's really good, but you spell divine like this, "Devine" is a city in texas, while "divine" means something heavenly.
Reply:you're saying love a little too much; might freak her out. id probably just try talking to her first.