Warm sun fills the air
As waves crash on the sand
Trees sway back and forth
“Barely a breath of wind”
Rain beats down on the mountains
The pond ripples below
Leaves ride down the waterfall
Crumbling to the pond beneath
Water rushes down the stream
The leaves begin to change
Suddenly everything gets colder
Snow begins to fall
Covering all that lies in its past
Gently packing itself down
As days begin to past
It slowly melts away
Rain pelts the rocks
Thunder booms
Lightning strikes
Lighting up the darkness
Frogs croak
As birds chirp
Soaring from above
The reflection of the moon
The glimmering of the stars
Wind blows in the forest
As they hover over the land below
From above the clouds watch over the land
Flowers begin to sprout
Soon enough the world is in peace
(thats all i have so far any tips)
Please rate this from 1-10 ten being the best. :) thanks
What would you rate this peaceful poem?
That was lovely, did you write it yourself?
Reply:i would give it an infinity because you cant rate this poem because it is so great and graceful
Reply:Very good. 10 all the way. :D
Reply:I'll give it 6-7 , its very good but its not unique
Reply:I think and 8.
Reply:It really kinda speaks to you i give it 9. (not a 10 because i dont like long poems.)
Reply:8ish..that was a really good poem!! ^_^
Reply:hmmm let me see i would rate this a -100 lol jk i would rate it a 10 its way better than mine!!!!!!!!!
ur bff,
danielle
Reply:10
Reply:I would give it an 11 out of 10
Reply:A ten! I felt myself beginning to float!
Monday, January 30, 2012
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