New poem about spring...any good?

Is this a good poem...or is it just like a poem "in the land of sunshine and smiles?" haha if you know what i mean.



If Only Forever



Sunshine peeks

Breaks through darkened clouds

Following a storm

Young flowers blossom

Seas of pink,

Orange, red, gold

After a gentle rainfall

Moisture clings

To freshly spread dirt

Birds chirp

Of all colors

Sing

Nature comes alive

When light sheds the earth

From winter’s grey

To the green of spring

Breezes softly blow

Whistle through trembling leaves

Warmth from a fiery sun

Last month’s snow

Spreads to a puddle

New life sprouts

Quietly in the distance

Comes alive

A new fire burning

Within the brittle earth

Springtime again

If only to last forever

New poem about spring...any good?
i think your poem is beautiful and it expresses who you are and you should become a poet
Reply:Its a NICE poem but it isnt as great as it SHOULD be ......j/p nah but by this I mean its a beautiful poem but you could have done a better job Im not saying its not a good poem but I mean you coulda done better..... =/
Reply:Yay for spring and your beautiful poem!
Reply:great poem

you can send it in to poetry.com

they have poem contests
Reply:Good job!



=D
Reply:I like it,its creative