Monday, January 30, 2012

What would you rate this peaceful poem?

Warm sun fills the air

As waves crash on the sand

Trees sway back and forth

“Barely a breath of wind”

Rain beats down on the mountains

The pond ripples below

Leaves ride down the waterfall

Crumbling to the pond beneath

Water rushes down the stream

The leaves begin to change

Suddenly everything gets colder

Snow begins to fall

Covering all that lies in its past

Gently packing itself down

As days begin to past

It slowly melts away

Rain pelts the rocks

Thunder booms

Lightning strikes

Lighting up the darkness

Frogs croak

As birds chirp

Soaring from above

The reflection of the moon

The glimmering of the stars

Wind blows in the forest

As they hover over the land below

From above the clouds watch over the land

Flowers begin to sprout

Soon enough the world is in peace

(thats all i have so far any tips)

Please rate this from 1-10 ten being the best. :) thanks

What would you rate this peaceful poem?
That was lovely, did you write it yourself?
Reply:i would give it an infinity because you cant rate this poem because it is so great and graceful
Reply:Very good. 10 all the way. :D
Reply:I'll give it 6-7 , its very good but its not unique
Reply:I think and 8.
Reply:It really kinda speaks to you i give it 9. (not a 10 because i dont like long poems.)
Reply:8ish..that was a really good poem!! ^_^
Reply:hmmm let me see i would rate this a -100 lol jk i would rate it a 10 its way better than mine!!!!!!!!!



ur bff,

danielle
Reply:10
Reply:I would give it an 11 out of 10
Reply:A ten! I felt myself beginning to float!


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