My poem do you like it? Or do you dislike it? Or hate it even?

A Year





Autumn breezes with fallen leaves on the ground,

She whispers she loves me, my heart unwound,

I hold her close, can't live without her touch,

She goes to college, leaving me with not much.



Winter arrives, snow breezes and chills my breath,

Without her, the days and nights seem so long,

I hear her voice, wanting to see her today,

I close my eyes and remember yesterday.



Spring comes, the scent of flowers reminds me of her,

They say I shouldn't trust, thoughts of us a blur,

If she's with me in the end, I'll take the chance,

We can stand up to the test, not laying our love to rest.



Summer takes so long to come, waiting for her plane,

Life's empty without her, something I can not explain,

I see her, my heart and soul begins to stir,

The best day of my life, is any day I spend with her.

My poem do you like it? Or do you dislike it? Or hate it even?
Sounds awesome. Who's the lucky girl?
Reply:perfect

sweet

wish I could get a letter like that
Reply:I wish I could get something that sweet. I know that whoever she is will be the happiest girl in the world. If I got something like that, I'd be floating around with a big grin stuck permanently on my face! You sound awesome. I'm sure you'll stay together for a long time, if not forever!!!!
Reply:Like it :)
Reply:love it...perfect%26lt;3
Reply:That is so sweet perfection
Reply:thats good