What do you think of my poem?

The wind's blowing

so hard with its intention

to knock me down,

causing me to sway

so flower like, planting

my feet like a flower's

roots in the Earth.



I sway and sway

so wildly I could

float up and

travel in the wind

like a lonesome seed.



But no matter

how frigid air violently

nibbles at my skin,

no matter how frail

my bones become

from use and abuse,

I will not tumble and fall!



You, wind, will

never make me fall like

snow, melting from

the caress of the warm

breeze, then gone

and forgotten

within the moist

soil.

What do you think of my poem?
I can follow the imagery and it follows through. You personify the wind and I see metaphors for your life. you stand resolute before opposition. finally you address the wind and tame it to your purpose.
Reply:I have absolutely no critisism.

It was amazing!!!

I loved it!

Your saying "No! You will not bring me down!" and it's so bold. I love this poem!

Just jaw dropping! Wonderful!!!
Reply:Oh, this is such a beautiful little poem! Its language is direct, its form is simple, its ideas are straightforward and clear. There is nothing complex here. And that is why this work has such natural elegance and beauty. It is absolutely lovely and I LOVE IT!
Reply:No, not from me. I absolutely love it. It's great.