What do you think of my lyrics?
Song Title: It's you again
Last week, I saw you with her
You looked so happy,
I felt so more than sure
that it was over
with me and you
(Hook)
it happened so fast, what could I've done,
the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,
I don't want you anymore.
(Chorus)
Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again.
I was at the store on Friday afternoon,
I saw you there, thought it was to soon,
Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,
we got together too late
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
It’s not about how long it takes
It’s not about why we broke up
We just need to remember
The good times we had and we’ll
Be together.
If the shoe fits
We’ll never miss.
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you a…
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again
Again
Again
Again
It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…
Maybe Lovin' you still....
Music L?vers....help pls.?
It's very pretty. I'd love to hear what it sounds like set to music.
Reply:Thats awesome, its really good
Reply:Sounds great, too much like my life though
Reply:Im not really into that kinda music but the people who are im sure love it.
some of your rhyme patterns are off but otherwise good
(I don't mean the actual words your are rhyming with)
Reply:one word: CHEESE...been there, done that...stop writing recycled lyrics
Reply:these lyrics are so cool i hope so will it be its tune.can you please send me its recording on mail
Reply:I'd probably change it if it was played on the Radio, I'm not into Country music.
Reply:i'm going to be honest with you. It's a little immature. Not to sound mean or anything but a 3rd grader could write this song.
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