What do you think of these poems, which is better?

There were set up in a certain order but it wouldn't stay so there are just starting at the side, once you start u will understand.



Simile Poem



Sand on beaches

in the summer

is like

Ice on rinks in

the winter.

Flowers in gardens

in the spring

is like

Leaves on lawns

in the fall.

The four Seasons

is like

Music it always

Changes.



HAIKU POEM

The leaves change colors

Falling slowly to the ground

And blow in the wind



MODERN POEM

There's a chill in

the air,

Snow will fall

soon,

Children will play

while Adults

Shovel

their drive ways.

Get your

Mittens,

boots and hats

Winter is coming!

What do you think of these poems, which is better?
the last additional detial

i like it

and its like about me kinda!!!!!!!!!!!



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